Match 17380 Jean Grey (Time Displaced) vs. Chloe Bourgeois

[Movie-Brat]

Note: This is a tweaked version of a match I wrote. Further details explained below.

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Long ago in an unknown time, across millions of galaxies away from Earth. There was a war. A war seemingly a lot were unaware of, even when battles found their way to Earth. 

 

The Last Great Time War. 

 

The Daleks had declared war on the Time Lords. Even after the Time Lords had fired the first shot. Sending the champion of peace, The Doctor, to prevent their creation on Skaro, years before their first encounter. 

 

The Doctor was even brought in to join the war with the Time Lords to fight the Daleks. And yet ultimately and unfortunately, while the Doctor was successful in ending the war and destroyed the Daleks, the renegade Time Lord destroyed the planet Gallifrey itself along with its inhabitants. All within the final days of the war with all forces exhausting their resources. Things had become desperate. 

 

And while thanks to the 10th and 11th incarnations of the Doctor, there were slight changes, the War incarnation had not remembered after regenerating. Leaving the 9th Doctor distraught and hardened after the events. But even unknown to other incarnations, artifacts of the Time War are still roaming throughout the universe. Even the Daleks. 

 

One group was even lost to time during one of their battles, landing in what ultimately became modern day France. The Dalek squad led by one of the many members of the Dalek Supreme Council resided underneath, plotting and waiting when to strike. 

 

Throughout their reactivation as soon as they woke up, they had discovered humans with extraordinary abilities. Some use technology, others used magic, even plenty born with powers. The Daleks saw them as an immediate threat but also to their advantage for they could control them, use them as slaves until they were no longer useful. 

 

The Time War had ended but to this group, it hasn't. Unaware of the outcome. They will exterminate all humans no matter what. 

 

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The Daleks had observed through their all seeing monitors of their ship. They had witnessed Shadow Moth having akumutized Chloe yet again, somehow getting the Bee miraculous, once again becoming Miracle Queen. 

 

The two were now commencing an assault on France, attempting to draw out Miraculous Ladybug and Cat Noir. 

 

The Dalek Supreme, in gold and black armor, spoke, "THE AC-TIONS OF THE LIFE-FORMS ARE INTER-FERING WITH OUR PLANS!"

 

"WE MUST EX-TER-MI-NATE THEM!" One of the Daleks concurred. 

 

"THE EARTH MUST FEEL VUN-ERA-BLE FIRST!" The Dalek Supreme continued. "THEY MUST BE CAUGHT OFF-GUARD!"

 

The Dalek Supreme turned to his captured subjects beside them. 

 

Imprisoned in gravity holding cells, there were dozens of heroes. Many of which were deemed missing for weeks. Members of the Avengers, Champions, X-Men, the Fantastic Four, the Inhumans, Eternals, the Sailor Guardians, the Ninja Turtles, even a Power Ranger or two. All of them captured and even placed headbands to keep them in line under their control. Hovering above platforms. Some of which had metal collars around their necks should any of them resist the headband.

 

"No..." A teenage girl with short red hair named Jean Grey groaned. "Don't... do this!"

 

"PLACE THE COL-LAR ON THE MU-TANT!" Commanded the Dalek Supreme. 

 

Descending from the ceiling came long elongated robotic hands weilding a metal collar. It ended up being forcibly placed around her neck despite Jean's efforts to resist the mind control. With the collar device snapped on, the telepath ceased resisting. 

 

Ajak, the leader of the Eternals, stared in horror. She could not stand that a child was going to be borderline tortured and forced to do their bidding. 

 

"No!" Kamala Khan aka Ms Marvel shouted in distress. "Leave her alone!"

 

"Please! Don't do this!" Ajak shouted. "She is only a child!" 

 

"You bastards! Barbarians!" Screamed Echo, who had acquired the powers of the Phoenix. "This is inhumane!"

 

"SILENCE!" The Dalek Supreme screamed back at the captors. 

 

"PLACE THE COL-LARS ON THE FOUR LIFE-FORMS AS WELL!" The Dalek Supreme then barked his next orders.

 

To the horror of the women who protested, the collars descended down and despite all efforts to escape, it proved futile in the end as they were nothing they could do but have the collars be forced on their necks. 

 

All four young women (or immortal in the case of Ajak) gagged a bit, almost vomiting as a side effect due to the forceful nature, their heads dropped before lifting up in obedience to their new masters. 

 

Jean's gravity prison finally deactivated with her descending to the floor gracefully and then kneeling in front of the Dalek Supreme. 

 

"WHOM DO YOU SERVE?" Asked the Dalek Supreme.

 

"I serve the Dalek race." Jean replied in a monotone voice. 

 

"YOU WILL AT-TACK AND EX-TER-MI-NATE THESE LIFE-FORMS!" The Dalek Supreme pointed to the view screen featuring Miracle Queen and Shadow Moth. 

 

"THEY ARE THE EN-E-MIES OF THE DA-LEKS!" Said the Dalek Supreme. "ALL EN-E-MIES OF THE DA-LEKS MUST BE DES-TROY-ED! EX-TER-MI-NATE THEM!" 

 

"As you command, Dalek Supreme." Jean said as she bowed. 

 

"YOU WILL BE GIV-EN INS-TRUC-TIONS WHEN NEED-ED." The Dalek Supreme added. 

 

"Yes, Dalek Supreme." Jean nodded in obiedence. 

 

She stepped on a platform in the center and dematerialized, sent to her enemies to destroy. The Daleks then went to the view screen to observe and as a microphone device descended from above to give orders when necessary. 

 

"SEND THE OT-HER THREE TO AS-SIST HER!" The Dalek Supreme then ordered. "E-QUIP THE E-TER-NAL KNOWN AS A-JAK TO STRIKE WHEN OR-DERED!"

 

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Chloe, otherwise now known as Miracle Queen, was causing chaos around her. Just waiting for Ladybug and Cat Noir to show up with ShadowMoth. 

 

"You will all bow before me as soon as I defeat Ladybug!" Chloe laughed. 

 

Her moment was short lived however as she noticed a large shadow looming over her. And promptly got bigger and bigger until she finally leapt out of danger. A limo fell onto the pavement in an act of murder. 

 

"Who did that?!" Chloe screamed. 

 

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A brief flash of light appeared near the very top of the Eiffel Tower. 

 

The now mind controlled Ajak, Ms Marvel and Echo walked on the upper platforms to survey the area where their partner was. Despite being up from afar, they could see Queen Bee and ShadowMoth in the area.

 

They stared emotionless at the sight of their targets. Ajak was armed with a futuristic looking rifle supplied by the Daleks. After careful construction and placement aim, the weapon was ready. 

 

She looked through the scope and the computer automatically targeted both. 

 

"DO NOT FI-RE UN-TIL I GIVE THE OR-DER!" The Eternal heard the Dalek Supreme give his orders via comlink. 

 

"DO YOU UN-DER-STAND?"

 

"Yes, Dalek Supreme." Ajak replied in monotone. "We await your orders."

 

"IF THE FIGHT DOES NOT FAVOR THE MU-TANT," The Dalek Supreme added. "NOT ON-LY YOU WILL FI-RE ON OR-DER, YOU AND THE OT-HERS WILL FIGHT TO EX-TER-MIN-NATE THE TAR-GETS AND ANY-ONE WHO COMES WITH-IN VINC-CIN-I-TY! IS THAT UN-DER-STOOD?" 

 

"Yes, Dalek Supreme." Ajak, Ms Marvel and Echo nodded in unison and in the same monotone voice. 

 

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Finally, a human shaped shadow appeared before Queen Bee and ShadowMoth.

 

Queen Bee looked up in astonishment as soon as she saw who it was. As did Shadow Moth from afar. 

 

"What the devil?!" He exclaimed in shock and amazement. 

 

It was Jean Grey as she floated in mid air and landed gracefully on the ground. 

 

"One of the missing heroes!" Shadow Moth said. "What is she doing here?" 

 

"Oh, it's one of you disgusting mutants!" Chloe gagged. "Weren't you freaks now on some dumb island or something?"

 

Jean could only give her a cold, emotionless stare. Almost as if she were a lifeless puppet come to life when needed. 

 

"What's wrong with you?" Chloe smugly asked before laughing, "Afraid you'll get stung?" 

 

She laughed in arrogance at her own pun. 

 

"You will be exterminated." Jean said in the same emotionless, monotone voice as before and the others. 

 

Abruptly, Chloe stopped laughing. 

 

"What?" 

 

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"YOU WILL BE EX-TER-MI-NATED IN THE NAME OF THE DA-LEK RACE!" The Dalek Supreme said, telling Jean what to say in an attempt to test the microphone mind control device. 

 

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"Resistance is futile." Jean said and continued to drone on. "The Dalek race is supreme. You will not win this battle. Nor any other. You will lose to the greater supremacy of the Dalek race."

 

"Okay, I don't know if this Dalek thing is like your mutant god or something." Chloe said, clearly fed up with the telepath. "But I don't have time for you, muties!"

 

"Exterminate." Said Jean as via her telepathy, she threw another car at Chloe. 

 

Once again, the girl dodged the vehicle. 

 

"That's it! I don't care if Ladybug and Cat Noir come or not!" Screamed a frustrated Chloe. "Your mutie butt is mine! And I'm going to need target practice anyway!"

 

She charged at Jean but not before the telepath managed to lift chunks of pavement to throw at her opponent. And now the battle began. 

 

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This is basically something of a George Lucas-fied slight rewrite I did. Adding in new elements for the fight. I felt, I could have made this a bit better. So I decided to go back and re post this fight with the tweaks. 

 

I may continue the five parter depending how much time the site has left. But as I said before, this is part one of a five fight story arc involving the Daleks as the main villains mind controlling a bunch of kidnapped superheroes. 

 

In this fight, it's time displaced Jean Grey is at full power and strength and Chloe is in her Miracle Queen form. 

 

The object being if Chloe can survive a mind controlled murderous Jean Grey as she throws everything at her and even Jean delving into Chloe's mind. 

 

But there's a catch, if say Chloe were to have the advantage, would she get assassinated by Ajak as ordered by the Dalek Supreme?

[Callisto]

Learn More About
Jean Grey (Time Displaced)
Read more about Jean Grey (Time Displaced) at Wikipedia
Official Site: Marvel Links: Wikipedia

Chloe Bourgeois
Read more about Chloe Bourgeois at Wikipedia
Official Site: Zagtoon Links: Wikipedia

[RakaiThwei]

I'm going to go with Jean here!

[DSkillz]

A good set-up here, Movie-Brat. You know, I think this is a bit improved from the last time you posted it.

As for the match, I'd still say Jean takes it, and not just because she may be a bit more powerful than Chloe. With an intent to kill from jump and more actual combat experience than Chloe, Jean would likely be more precise and aggressive and keep Chloe flustered with her attacks for the win.

[Venom 2009]

Nice to see another Chloe match. 😉

[Movie-Brat]

1 hour ago, Venom 2009 said:

Nice to see another Chloe match. 😉

How do you like her chances then? 

[Venom 2009]

1 hour ago, Movie-Brat said:

How do you like her chances then? 

Well, I like Chloe to win, but I feel Jean will get the most votes.

[Callisto]

Match Final Results

Member Ratings:
5.00 - patrickthekid
4.20 - DSkillz
5.00 - Venom 2009

FPA Calculation:
3 Total Votes cast
14.20 Total Combined Score
14.20 / 3 = 4.73 Final Rating on the match

MATCH SCORE
Jean Grey (Time Displaced): 4
Chloe Bourgeois: 2