Match 13444 Princess Azula vs. Katara

[Guest Hayesmeister5651]

Thanks. Any improvements you guys think can be made?

I can't really say because it is better than anything I have written. Typically, I don't critique things I can not do better at.

[C.T.]

You give me too much credit or yourself too little credit.

[Guest Doomsayer]

Well, I really enjoyed the set up. but Azula will murder Katara and seek vengance on the entire world

[C.T.]

Fair enough. Glad you enjoyed it.

[C.T.]

AvP!

[Guest khoi]

Now This The Set-Up That i go OMG THIS IS THE BEST!

Edited February 9, 2013 by khoi

[C.T.]

I wish, heh. Maybe best out right now(and I doubt even that) but not overall.

[C.T.]

Some edits added, thanks to a good critique. More to come, most likely. If I'm not lazy.

[corvette1710]

So by most likely you mean absolutely not.

 

[C.T.]

Probably.

[DSkillz]

Azulaang! Or Aangzula! Or whatever term the shippers would come up with.

 

So... not a bromance after all. Very interesting twist on A: TLA post-war. Pretty believeable as well. Everybody else in the Challenge just may have their work cut out for them.

 

As for the match, however you look at it, Azula loses this one. By acting out this way, Azula has probably lost her best shot at being with Aang, in more ways than one. In combat, she hasn't done particularly well against waterbenders that are at least close to her in skill and power. The rest of Team Avatar is just another room away, per the set-up, so they'll very likely hear the commotion and intervene. And finally, it's possible that the Avatar State may rouse Aang just long enough to give the assist.

[C.T.]

Ah DSkillz has made an appearance!

 

Thanks for reading and commenting.

 

As for Azula losing both her second chance and the fight, it's possible. Dammit, forgot about all the others being very close by and the Avatar State...for the purposes of this match they will not be allowed to interfere because magic stops them. Somehow. Yeah. But they can come and do what they wish when it's over.

[AVP vs The Terminator]

I think I'm just gonna stare at the bottom of this page for a good, long while.

[Guest khoi]

Nope.

[C.T.]

What?

[AVP vs The Terminator]

What?

 

Who was that directed at?

[Guest khoi]

What?

[C.T.]

Both of you.

[AVP vs The Terminator]

I'm not reading your setup.

[Guest khoi]

Heh?

[C.T.]

Ok AvP.

 

Heh isn't a question.

[Guest khoi]

You ARE the question.

[C.T.]

No I am not Victor Sage.

[Guest khoi]

But i am The Doctor.

[C.T.]

Congratulations.