Guest Hayesmeister5651 Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 Thanks. Any improvements you guys think can be made?I can't really say because it is better than anything I have written. Typically, I don't critique things I can not do better at. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 8, 2013 Author Share Posted February 8, 2013 You give me too much credit or yourself too little credit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Doomsayer Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 Well, I really enjoyed the set up. but Azula will murder Katara and seek vengance on the entire world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 8, 2013 Author Share Posted February 8, 2013 Fair enough. Glad you enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 9, 2013 Author Share Posted February 9, 2013 AvP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest khoi Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 (edited) Now This The Set-Up That i go OMG THIS IS THE BEST! Edited February 9, 2013 by khoi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 9, 2013 Author Share Posted February 9, 2013 I wish, heh. Maybe best out right now(and I doubt even that) but not overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 9, 2013 Author Share Posted February 9, 2013 Some edits added, thanks to a good critique. More to come, most likely. If I'm not lazy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
corvette1710 Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 So by most likely you mean absolutely not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 9, 2013 Author Share Posted February 9, 2013 Probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 Azulaang! Or Aangzula! Or whatever term the shippers would come up with. So... not a bromance after all. Very interesting twist on A: TLA post-war. Pretty believeable as well. Everybody else in the Challenge just may have their work cut out for them. As for the match, however you look at it, Azula loses this one. By acting out this way, Azula has probably lost her best shot at being with Aang, in more ways than one. In combat, she hasn't done particularly well against waterbenders that are at least close to her in skill and power. The rest of Team Avatar is just another room away, per the set-up, so they'll very likely hear the commotion and intervene. And finally, it's possible that the Avatar State may rouse Aang just long enough to give the assist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 10, 2013 Author Share Posted February 10, 2013 Ah DSkillz has made an appearance! Thanks for reading and commenting. As for Azula losing both her second chance and the fight, it's possible. Dammit, forgot about all the others being very close by and the Avatar State...for the purposes of this match they will not be allowed to interfere because magic stops them. Somehow. Yeah. But they can come and do what they wish when it's over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AVP vs The Terminator Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 I think I'm just gonna stare at the bottom of this page for a good, long while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest khoi Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 Nope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 10, 2013 Author Share Posted February 10, 2013 What? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AVP vs The Terminator Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 What? Who was that directed at? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest khoi Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 What? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 10, 2013 Author Share Posted February 10, 2013 Both of you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AVP vs The Terminator Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 I'm not reading your setup. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest khoi Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 Heh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 10, 2013 Author Share Posted February 10, 2013 Ok AvP. Heh isn't a question. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest khoi Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 You ARE the question. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 10, 2013 Author Share Posted February 10, 2013 No I am not Victor Sage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest khoi Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 But i am The Doctor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted February 10, 2013 Author Share Posted February 10, 2013 Congratulations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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