I was milead by Flash saying "No I will stop your team" I did not mean any offense, but it is still way overkill even if void is as powerful as Sentry and Sentry is the poor man's Superman, Flash does not have a snowball's chance speed but no denting his skin plus flying thats a problem for Barry or Wally you did not say.
No there are errors in grammer and capitilization and spelling (phoniex, not phionox) The story I can live with even if it jumps I am just trying to help your writing.
This match is full of grammer errors, capitalization, needs quotation marks, and people are out of character. Overkill. Flash vs. Dark Phoniex, Void Lex, Joker, and Doomsday. Flash does not the living tribunal make.
Thanks a lot. I like being called a fanboy as much as everyone else. By making it onevone I thought I gave Frank a challenge at an otherwise Kobeyashi-Mary type senario. If Supes can lose to Lex (normal human with a rock from Krypton) than Punisher has a chance.