skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 Chapter 1 Welcome to the Crimson Death Hotel 10/25/09Time:18:10 -In front of the hotel is a boy at the age of 16. As he enters he is welcomed by a women on the front desk"Welcome to the Crimson death hotel may I help you" -At that moment the Priest had arrive at the town entrance. -As for the detectives they where on there way to ashwood it would take then 30 minutes. OOC: sorry for a crappy intro I try to make it more interesting later on
jesus20456 Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 Chapter 1 Welcome to the Crimson Death Hotel 10/25/09Time:18:10 -In front of the hotel is a boy at the age of 16. As he enters he is welcomed by a women on the front desk"Welcome to the Crimson death hotel may I help you" -At that moment the Priest had arrive at the town entrance. -As for the detectives they where on there way to ashwood it would take then 30 minutes. OOC: sorry for a crappy intro I try to make it more interesting later onOOC: is that me?"Is this place haunted?" asks jesus.
Guest KevinDWolf93 Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 Chapter 1 Welcome to the Crimson Death Hotel 10/25/09Time:18:10 -As for the detectives they where on there way to ashwood it would take then 30 minutes. OOC: sorry for a crappy intro I try to make it more interesting later on The drive was quiet. Remington wasnt saying a word as he drove onward.
skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Author Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 OOC: is that me?"Is this place haunted?" asks jesus.OOC:yes"why you ask that? now what is your name"
jesus20456 Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 OOC:yes"why you ask? that now what is your name""My name is jesus. jesus mendoza."says the young boy.
skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Author Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 "My name is jesus. jesus mendoza."says the young boy."Alright give me a moment to check your name" The lady start searching his name on the computer."Ok your is room is room 780 have a nice stay." OOC: quick update there is 12 floor(to stay in) each floor has 100 rooms but the most you can get in to is 15(per floor) in storyAlso jesus you can explore the hotel pick a area each area may take 10 minutes in story or go to your room
jesus20456 Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 "Alright give me a moment to check your name" The lady start searching his name on the computer."Ok your is room is room 780 have a nice stay." OOC: quick update there is 12 floor(to stay in) each floor has 100 rooms but the most you can get in to is 15(per floor) in storyAlso jesus you can explore the hotel pick a area each area may take 10 minutes in story or go to your roomJesus went to the seventh floor hoping there will be clues to his powers on the lucky floor.
skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Author Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 Jesus went to the seventh floor hoping there will be clues to his powers on the lucky floor.Pick. elevator or stairsyour choice
jesus20456 Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 Pick. elevator or stairsyour choicejesus arrives at the elevators, but decides stairs would be better. being in an enclosed space seems like a bad idea.
Guest He who fights monsters Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 "I too would like to check a room for one. Donovan Stevenson is the name." Donovan said, with his cross in the pockets of his humble clothes. He had a Bible in his hand and his training ready.
skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Author Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 "I too would like to check a room for one. Donovan Stevenson is the name." Donovan said, with his cross in the pockets of his humble clothes. He had a Bible in his hand and his training ready." I see do you have reservation or are you paying up front"As the lady ask in a calm voice.
Guest He who fights monsters Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 " I see do you have reservation or are you paying up front"As the lady ask in a calm voice."I have some money with me." Donovan said, having $600 with him.
skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Author Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 jesus arrives at the elevators, but decides stairs would be better. being in an enclosed space seems like a bad idea.He goes to the stairway doors and opens it and goes up.As he climbs the stair slow. He hears nothing. He opens the door to the seventh floor and walk toward his room.On his way he see a little girl playing in the hallway.OOC:talk or don't talk your choice
jesus20456 Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 " I see do you have reservation or are you paying up front"As the lady ask in a calm voice.Jesus looks around to see someone else . "Hello." Jesus says.
skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Author Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 "I have some money with me." Donovan said, having $600 with him."Ok your room is 1209 have nice stay"OOC:same thing hwfm you can either go to your room or explore an area that takes 10min
skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Author Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 Jesus looks around to see someone else . "Hello." Jesus says.Girl then runs away from Jesus. He see some thing on the floor it look like a picture with a Mom and dad and her. OOC: pick it up or leave it
Guest He who fights monsters Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 "Ok your room is 1209 have nice stay"OOC:same thing hwfm you can either go to your room or explore an area that takes 10minOOC: I choose to explore first. I seek to check for evil spirits. Donovan explores the hotel along the way to his room.
skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Author Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 OOC: I choose to explore first. I seek to check for evil spirits. Donovan explores the hotel along the way to his room.ballroom,dinning room, kitchen,lobby,barpool office libary (in hotel)or basement Your choice
jesus20456 Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 Girl then runs away from Jesus. He see some thing on the floor it look like a picture with a Mom and dad and her. OOC: pick it up or leave itjesus looks at the picture."clue? sure why not." mumbles jesus as he takes the picture.
skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Author Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 jesus looks at the picture."clue? sure why not." mumbles jesus as he takes the picture.He picks it up and looks on the back to see noting. Jesus continues on to his room. He open the door and enters the room 708.OOC:ok do what ever you want in room
Guest He who fights monsters Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 The library may have useful readings, so Donovan chose to explore there for information.
Mercenaryblade Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 "The night looked like something out's some B grade horror movie I didn't say a word on my way into the town of Ashwood, as it was called lot of locals say the place is full of ghost but I just dismiss it as hitting the bar a little too hard." "My name is Derek Scribe, I'm a private eye." OOC: I told you I would be doing this film noir style
jesus20456 Posted August 31, 2010 Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 He picks it up and looks on the back to see noting. Jesus continues on to his room. He open the door and enters the room 708.OOC:ok do what ever you want in roomjesus looks around the room. he decides that nothing helpful is there and attempts to talk to ghosts. "Anyone here?" he asked to any ghost nearby.
skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Author Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 The library may have useful readings, so Donovan chose to explore there for information.As he look around the library he fines some old newspaper clips. The clip show the death of a local barber in the hotel. He died by bleeding to death on his bed. the room is 9*0.There was more clipping to take however there were all blackout. Nothing on the girl was found in the library.OOC:side missionyour choice take it or leave it
skykorean Posted August 31, 2010 Author Read Aloud Posted August 31, 2010 jesus looks around the room. he decides that nothing helpful is there and attempts to talk to ghosts. "Anyone here?" he asked to any ghost nearby.No reply.As he look around he see a piece of paper. "My dear savior I meet you in the basement of the hotel."Time 18:20
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